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Death and the Detective Series – 7th Installment

May 10, 2010 By Cathy Miller Leave a Comment

I started the Death and the Detective series from the writing prompts challenges at Creative Copy Challenge. The words in bold are the writing prompts from the challenge.
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Challenge #17

The tipped glass of red wine flowed over the purity of the white linen, forming single drops of escape. Swallowed by the pooling blood, the drops surrendered to the silent thirst.

Following the path, he dipped his finger across the mingled crimson and raised it to lips gone dry. A hurricane of emotion shook him, as it always did. From his early days when he learned scary monsters were more than a child’s imagination, he fought hard for control. Never again would he be the victim. If he had to kill them all, so be it.

Pulling the aging photograph from his inside pocket, he pressed it against the slow beating of his heart and began to cry. Why was there always so much drama? If only they wouldn’t make him so mad.

Brett received the call shortly before three a.m. At that hour, he knew someone else had died. That was his job. That was his life. There was no prophylactic cure for the atrocity of murder, and it never got easier. Making his way toward the morgue, Brett prayed it never did.

With Metallica blasting in hysterical, ear-splitting volume, Brett waved his hand in front of the face of the city’s coroner, Randy Watkins.

“Yo, Randy, how the hell can you hear yourself think?”

Picking up a remote, Randy silenced his ironic song selection, And Justice For All.

“We’re talking classic here,” Randy smiled, “Anyway, my guests don’t seem to mind.”

“Well, if any of them raise a hand in protest, let me know. What’s the word on my Jane Doe?”

Rolling his wheelchair over to an adjacent table, Randy pointed to her lower back.

“Here’s something that might interest you.”

Leaning close, Brett murmured, “What is that? A faded tattoo?

“More like a stain.”

“You mean a birthmark?”

“No, I mean a stain.”

“So, what is it?”

“Elementary, my dear Watson. It’s hair dye.”

“Funny place for hair dye.”

“Exactly.”

Challenge #18

After his last serial murder case, Detective Brett Connors took a much-needed break. He climbed into his fully restored 1965 Ford Mustang Coupe with the vintage pony seats, reveling in the power of more than 3000 Revolutions Per Minute. A vagrant traveler caught in a riptide of emotions, Brett discovered it’s hard to outrace your thoughts – even at lightning speed.

As he drove past hillsides lush from winter rains, his thoughts whispered, “do you hear me?” But, it wasn’t his voice he heard. It was the voice of a killer. The sound of one so evil, one so vile, his acts ranked their own brand of felony. In his gut, Brett knew the hollow pain of arriving too late. He knew no matter how far he traveled or how fast he drove, he could never turn back the clock. He would always arrive too late.

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